I would like to ask you, if you could review my article: "How to make money on YouTube" – https://mirillis.com/blog/en/how-to-make-money-on-youtube/
My friend reviewed the "grammatic side" of the article and fixed them (but he is not a native English language speaker).
Please let me know if you see any mistakes. I will also be grateful for your advice when it comes to SEO, so I could be aware of those mistakes in the future.
Ps. You can be really honest and mean, you don't have to…